SHADOWED
LOVE
Chapter
3- Confession
Shalini was now in confusion about what to say to Sumit. She
was not prepared to face him. She herself didn’t know whether she loved him or
it was just a mutual attraction because of all the blank phones calls, letter and
the past memories. Shalini was totally messed up inside her mind. All she was
thinking was of Sumit and what did she felt for him. She was searching in her
mind to find an answer and slept with all the thoughts on standby.
Next morning she didn’t have the guts to face anybody from her
gang especially Sumit. It was not about the guts she had to face him or not but
she wanted to be sure enough to answer him properly about her feelings. She
wanted to be prepared with every answer Sumit might be having.
After having her breakfast she decided that she will not go to
college today and rather stay at home and think about the solution or what she
really wanted in her life with Sumit as context. Firstly she wanted to know the
reason of so much confusion.
She never felt this before ever in her life that
too so strong for someone. May be its illusion because of the circumstances or
may be it is her emotions shouting at her, throwing words to nurture them into
thoughts.
After thinking about an hour she felt exhausted and kind of
bored, so, she thought a stroll in garden with morning fresh air and some music
could help her.
It was 9 in the morning and the December mornings are quite
cold so she took her jacket and her earphones after wearing her shoes and
headed towards the park near her house.
She was feeling better now. No tension. No thoughts of some
guy she thoughts she knew or anything or any change in her life. She felt
revived from all the mess.
Just then a hand touched her shoulder, and she suddenly
stopped and turned.
“Hey Miss Shalini Talwar!” said Daksh.
“Long time no see, where have you been these days?” Daksh
asked.
“Oh it’s you Daksh! Well yeah long time. You know nah college
and then work and hanging out with friends. Just don’t get that time now.” Said
Shalini.
“I can understand Shalini, don’t worry.” He said giving a warm
comforting smile.
Then he asked “so what brings you here today that too on a so
cold morning?”
To which Shalini replied “actually I was tensed and confused
about a decision so I thought going on a walk won’t do any harm”
“So what happened, you can share with me?” asked Daksh
Shalini then shared everything with Daksh. Daksh was her close
friend at time of her school but after schooling, but after that college came
up and their chats had been restricted to messages on phone. She shared the
scene with the calls and the letter and her new gang she made in college. She
shared how once Sumit had gone under so much trouble just to bring her lab file
from her house to college in rainy weather. She shared and remembered how many
small things Sumit have been trying to do for Shalini from the starting of
their friendship. Just like, how he stood up for her campaigning as the youth
new leader but she lost it. She remembered that whenever she felt low, he would
sing her a song playing on his guitar, she remembered how he usually takes care
of every relationship he makes and how firm he is about keeping them, she got
remember his nature, his smile, and his strong will to make everybody happy.
She told everything to Daksh.
Daksh asked Shalini “ST just tell me one thing!”
Shalini didn’t like the ‘ST’ tag because it was the initials
of her name, may be it was because of she thought people will then call her
scheduled tribe. She felt weird about ‘ST’ but still tried to maintain a smile
for a friend who was helping her out and said
“Yeah say Daksh.”
”Do you feel something for him?” he asked.
“I just don’t know Daksh.” She said.
“Well he seems to be a really nice guy for anybody and every
girl out there but coming to a solution or a decision just like that while
thinking would be waste of time and emotions if you don’t feel anything for
him.” He suggested
“Umm... what do you think? Do I feel anything for him?” asked
Shalini confusingly.
“Well I don’t know whether you feel about this guy or not but
I know one thing that you are a smart girl so don’t rush things, just think
lightly. You will figure out everything by the end of the day.” He said with a
smile assuring enough to help her.
“Thanks a lot Daksh. That was a lot of help. It really means a
lot to me.” Shalini said smiling.
“No issues Shalini. What are friends for in the end.” He said.
His phone ringed.
“Well I think I need to go. I will catch you later. It was
nice to meet you. And don’t worry everything would turn out to be fine.” He
said and left.
Shalini was now kind of sorted out in her mind. She went back
to her house, and thought very calmly about everything. She made notes of
everything, every little detail she knew.
At night finally Shalini was prepared for anything that comes
up the next day. And she went to bed with a wide smile and happy heart to be
coming up with the answer finally.
The next day she went to college and straight away she went to
Sumit to confront him and respond to his letter.
“Hi Shalini. Why didn’t you come yesterday?” asked Sumit.
“Well actually I was busy with something so I couldn’t come.” Shalini
responded.
Shalini continued.
“Umm… Sumit I saw your bouquet and your letter and I wanted to
talk to you about that.” She said.
“Umm yeah Shalini please don’t take it in a wrong way.” He
went nervous.
He continued.
“actually I wanted to say it directly but I heard you shouting
at phone and thought it wasn’t the right time to come up to you at that time of
night and saying all those things.” He said.
“What! What shouting?” Shalini asked.
“You seemed disturbed by the voice I could hear from outside.
You said something about stalker and police.” He said.
A gulp went down Shalini’s throat. Her mind was raging with
numerous thoughts now. But Sumit disturbed in between by asking “so what did
you want me to tell or I should ask what your reply is?”
hi , looks like the story is progressing quite well but It feels like a little overthought love story . That is making the plot seem a little straightforward.
ReplyDeleteOne thing i would suggest is that you think and write the story and then just edit the chapter for 2 days with whatever you feel like writing.
.I think this is your first novel . Dont fret , slowly slowly i am sure it will improve.One thing remember kiddo , dont make the story ambagious or it will become frustraneous.
Good luck kid :)
Hi, Thanks for your valuable support and trust in me. I hope I will try hard on editing part now and try to minimize my errors to bring out the best part of my stories for you. :)
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DeleteAfter i read the first of shadowed i knew it was not the ordinary love story expecting a lot from you and this new generation love story
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thanks a lot my friend for your support and believe in this first attempt of mine. thanks a lot. :)
DeleteEverybody THANKS A LOT for your support, trust and viewership for my first attempt of my novel. I will try harder on the editing part too and will reduce them. Hope you all love the other chapters too. I will try not to break your faith in me. Thanks a lot once again. :)
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